Jamal’s Evil Revenge

Fighting Words Dublin, John Scottus National School, 4th and 6th class, 27th January 2025

A long time ago in a land far, far away, there was a villain named Jamal. His best friend was Danny the duck. They both wanted to be in the NBA and they lived in a secret lab. 

One day, Timmy the daredevil came outside the lab door. All three of them went to Albuquerque, New Mexico. Timmy said, Give me all your money! 

They started to argue, and Timmy threatened them. Timmy said that he was the greatest player in the NBA and that they would never surpass him in his skill! He won 100 trophies in the NBA.

A person named Al came over and stopped the argument. But Timmy had a meltdown and punched Al!! Al got a concussion and went to the hospital. The doctor was so surprised that he fainted.

Jamal wants to take revenge on Timmy the daredevil. 

Danny the duck left Jamal and went to Australia. In Australia, Danny the duck broke his leg because he was rough playing. 

Jamal heard that Danny broke his leg, and Danny the duck realized that there’s no hospital in Australia! So he tried to run, but he remembered his leg was broken. Danny made a new friend that helped him named Joe. They realized that his real name was BillyBobJoe Junior.

Suddenly, Danny fell off of a cliff that was 200 metres high…

TO BE CONTINUED